Amanda Rivers

[amanda]

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Amanda Beth Rivers

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POKEMON Coordinator

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Lively, Timid, Relaxed, Intelligent

AGE:16
GENDER:Female
OCCUPATION: Coordinator
REGION:Johto
TOWN/CITY:Violet City
FACE CLAIM: [b]Soul Eater[/b] // [i]Tsubaki[/i]

HEIGHT:5'
WEIGHT:100 lbs
HAIR:Black
EYES:Blue

FAMILY:

►Summer Joan-Rivers [Mother]
►Adam Rivers [Father]
►Jacob Rivers [Little Brother]

PARTNER POKEMON ICON HERE

NICKNAME:Cinder
SPECIES:Cyndaquill
TYPE:Fire
MOVES:
-Tackle
-Leer

PERSONALITY: Brave, Outgoing, Dependent

HISTORY:

Brown an raised in Violet city, it wasn't long before the region grew boring to her. She'd lived there her whole life, and the tough battle style didn't really appeal to her. This distaste for her home region probably began to form after she became obbessed with watching Hoenn and Sinnoh contests. She considered moving and traveling when she got older, but she could never afford it, and she did like her region's Pokemon. When she heard of the Lerruen Region, she decided that it would be the perfect place to commence her journey.

[ROOT ADMIN]

Alright so there are actually several mistakes I've noticed in your application so I thought I should post here and get you to correct them. First of all you made it so that all the text is red. The only parts which should be red are the tags such as 'AGE' 'GENDER' etc. You can do that by placing your info after the

[/color] tag which is what I originally intended. Don't worry about fixing that however, it's actually your history I'm more concerned about.

In your history you have misspelled several words, or rather put in the wrong words creating bad grammatical errors. The first word in your history should be 'Born' not 'Brown'. 'Obbessed' is spelled wrong and should be 'Obsessed'. Those are the only mistakes I could actually find in regards to spelling errors. The last thing is that the character's history is something like a role play sample the staff look at, try adding more too it, this is to give us more to look at.
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